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Tuesday, July 13, 2010

Silent War.

Inspired by a friend. :)

The swords are drawn.
Though Invisible.

The eyes on the prize.
Though Unknown.

The wounds are deep,
Though they do not hurt.

The words are harsh.
Though Spoken to None.

No Spectators,
Yet the Humiliation.

The end, the start,
Left Undetermined.

3 comments:

Anonymous said...

Your. words. are. enchanting.

Can't say anything else.

I'm Aaisha said...

Really? .....COOL :D

Deviation said...

Bring Me Back My Life - I don't want to live it anymore.

Take Away My Truth - I don't want to face it anymore.

This Body is Not My Mine - My Soul Tells Me Another Story.

This Face Is Not Mine - I'm Hidden behind My Shadows.


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Though you've written this more than one year ago. But looking back one year ago. You still have great And amazing Poetry sense.

I read your 'About' page. And I get it. NEVER try to read it in front of your teacher. tHey will never get it ;).

Actually I never did it. But hey you can have awesome time sharing it with your best friends.

It is a very good poem. Keep Writing Like Your Wrote And Like You Write.

It's Just Great - And Never Lose Hope. IF you Published Book with all of your Current Poem. I'd buy it ;).